Blog #4

Passing our essays around in our peer groups helped a lot. They gave me many helpful tips and help me cut down on my word count. Reading my peers essays reinforced my own arguments. Other students would either have lots of quotes from people or many facts; i had a good combination of both. My essay still needs much revision. Although i have a lot of good arguments, its very unorganized. I need to set out my main points and write about each in an organized fashion.